mule
like an arrow only rarely, spent
bending bow or tense impending shaft
choose or not, you will, you do
soft soles no matter what
blister feet, turn aside, whistle midnight
and dawn, or a blanket drawn, out of sight,
just plain forget, trinkets in a closet box,
maybe wind on your face, doubting clouds,
thankful for shade, some say pray, some
meditate, you do, you don’t, another spoon
on the table, or resist, same meal in the
bowl either way
then there’s a mule on the road
here’s the choice, obstacle
or ride
neil reid © october 2013
for we write poems, the road, prompt by Pamela
me thinks, not so bad this poem if you only change the beginning and the end, oh yea, and rewrite that middle too. participation got the better of me. my excuse.
Very, very nice, Neil. Thanks for joining in. Love the ending and the whole.
Pamela
very very kind of you Pamela. I love the new prompt direction of WWP these days, and certainly including you. me, crazy busy right now. would have liked to find a better poem in me, but so it goes. I look forward to what else you’ll have in prompts for us. neil
Terrific ending. Did Don Quixote ride a mule?
🙂
Well, the mule is a choice, isn’t it? And we can look at it any way we like. Lately it’s been hard for me not to be a pessimist, but it is true that whatever you look at is colored by HOW you look. (The mule is cute, isn’t he?)
-Nicole