Posts Tagged ‘child’

Measured child

Measured child

  
First thing he read in a newspaper was only a shape.  Taken from the backside, held by other hands.  The carpet floor was rather thin.

Four feet measured the threadbare couch.  Two more the chair next door.  Paper and yarn in hand.  The third fretted about something fret worthy we suppose.

Clouds would seem closer than the ceiling was.  Summer up there, winter here.  Doors were polite, not sentinels.  A child is a rose with thorns inside.

Five feet, six feet tall, moved like wind passing through the living room.  Maybe more storms than wind.  Just a matter of kinetic momentum, not intent.

More than squares and circles, some people moved like spears, just that swift.  Might as well be more printed words, just that much mystery far.

There were potato chips on a plate ten feet tall.  Melted cheese among grandmother’s plants.  Ballpoint pens weren’t invented yet, nor better clues.

Down from the backporch a cabin with rusty window screens.  Later that would be a mistake.  Till then a young man slept but his feet were already wind.

Faster than a black crow one day the cabin held only dust.  And no one seems to say goodbye to a child that much young.  Snow sheets and he was out of sight.

Grandmother’s nose inside a rose. Then, what you’d expect.
 
 

neil reid © february 2012

 
 
could say stolen but it’s not really the same, different as ink blotted on another page. besides I think she’d understand, the one who makes me look this way. best not take me seriously.

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Written for Big Tent Poetry
prompt: Write a poem inspired by your favorite poem.

Prompt seem of more than reasonable appeal. Found it with my big toe. Went looking for just one poem. Instead, found this slightest of notes about the poet William Stafford and his life as a teacher too. So not exactly a poem, but perhaps what a poem might have been, even probably was, but just unseen.

This is only first draft of a poem-child, but maybe in the light of his question, right enough as it is. This one I won’t turn away.

“You could save the world by torturing one innocent child. Which innocent child?”
~William Stafford (teaching notes, provocative questions)

Which child first?

The devil doesn’t mind predicament. Neither God.
The low flight of pelicans along the shore inscribes
a line. Beak into shallow turbulence shows the way.
But what about that first pair of wings?

Who are they following? We might suppose
all first thoughts are similar. Do we navigate
towards our redemption or our doom?

There! Right there! That thought that just
rolled off the roof, splashed at your feet.
What choice did you make?

Which innocent thought did you set aside?
To which innocent child did you say,
“another day” or “done”? It works just like that
every moment of our lives.

We turn our heads into wind or away from wind,
turn left, turn right, or straight ahead. Though
mostly we think in terms of wakes left behind.
Too late for them.

Which innocent child would I sacrifice?
Not so much an act of choice, but willingness
to observe the choice already made.
Which child? Myself.

neil reid © july 2010

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Four feet tall

Four feet tall

Four feet tall

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A child today entered my eye.

Then a thought. Briefly. But

what I saw was feeling most.

Unblemished. Playfulness. Joy.

I’ve never been a father. But

now I understand. A beautiful

craft of thighs and desire told.

Yet there’s that thought outside

myself. Aching perfecting

becoming ripe. Me not me.

Just like God must see in us.

Neil Reid © January 2010
appreciatively, humbly said


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