Posts Tagged ‘beauty’

the everything poem

it’s just like we thought, all of us, all along.
whether we admit to that dead cat or not, or the urge
and fear to dance, we knew from the beginning of knowing,
through the middle, wife, husband, or neither, we knew
right to the end.

we do as well understand the nature of lies;
no fooling any one or any thing. but that’s just the very nature
of everything. nothing omitted. not one single drop.

that’s the nature of nature.
and even what isn’t, is, as soon as it comes to mind,
like coming around the bend. surprise is a lovely pretense.
that was always the joke about the tree and the apple
and the snake from the first beginning of time!

potholes are implied,
and a gathering place, like gutter leaves, for idyl thoughts
to collide. genuine sparks make us laugh. just as much
as beauty will coalesce. and there, there’s the tree again.

and then you’re jostled or it’s time to eat or go to work
and there those understandings sit on the shelf, quietly
busy, evaporating into ghosts that whisper as they might,
still forget. like keys left in other pants.

neil reid © january 2011

[commentary] Here’s the first of four. Long transition, this calendar stuff. And I’ve been sick (distracted and distracting). But honestly, I’m just slow to finish near anything. Not much in common these four, except for the fingers they share. Yet still they feel like they are much from the same bowl.

It is something my habit to want descriptions with nothing left aside, thus here the blatant attempt, “the everything poem”. But then I read, and it’s just another swipe (meaning near miss at best). (and another secret definition of unspoken, love?)

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my left foot hurts

my left foot hurts

don’t feel so kindly towards

shoes or concrete floors

what my stomach does at times,

unmentionable

my smile is not all my own

but you’re welcome to a smirk

can’t pull backyard weeds

without wanting surgery

and that dictionary, unmagnified

gibberish, like I knew it was

and what about those bumps

wrapped beneath the tree?

beauty as the crow flies

I suppose

neil reid © may 2010

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read write poem   napowrimo #21

prompt by Kristen McHenry   perfectly flawed

Today’s prompt is from Read Write Poem member Kristen McHenry:

“In ancient times, Persian rug makers were deeply religious and believed that only God could make something perfect. They would deliberately drop in a small faulty stitch, a flaw, into each Persian rug. In doing so, a ‘Persian Flaw’ revealed the rug maker’s devotion to God.” — Karel Weijand

Like many of us, I often struggle with the gremlin of perfectionism. The above quote reminds me that achieving perfection is not my prime directive in life, and that in fact, striving for perfection can be a form of hubris.

Write a poem about flaws and perfection in yourself or in nature or write about how you feel about being imperfect or perfect.

Here are some things you may want to reflect on as you write: Do flaws add beauty to the world? What does it feel like to experience perfection? What is it like to encounter flaws — in our selves, in others, in systems or in objects? As imperfect beings, are we able to adequately judge perfection?

If you’d like, you can try contrasting these both concepts in one poem or just choose the one that you feel most drawn to. There is potential for both perfection and flaws in everything on earth, so there’s no limit to to subject you use to frame your poems.

(Pardon my perfect clumsiness.)

Prodigal child

show me the rain that does not fall
show me the river that does not flow
even a lake     evaporates

tell me the imperfection you see
perfection resides like beauty does
you see?

think of a forbidden tree    think apple    think red
think of a tar baby too, and someone said
oh no, whatever you do, don’t eat that!

a sense of humor helps     you gotta appreciate
it was not the tree of the thing
it was the tree of the thought of the thing!

you just gotta laugh!

Neil Reid © April 2010

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Some hints toward happiness

Open your arms to a dawn

Cast your heart into a night

See what grows

See what follows

Spread a few wild seeds

Wild knows what to do, You observe

Take a breath

Now let go, everything dances on fingertips

Eat some cake

Pleasure is good for you

Butter too, cook some fish

Lick your fingers during meals

Go fishing with your heart

Harvest what is bright

Beauty is inside every shell

Also outside, right to horizon’s bow

Dare to see with generous eyes

Gently stir the soup

Appreciate every bowl you meet

Allow friends beneath what you fear

Be of good heart and understand

Who you will become, is enough

Eat dark like chocolate

Understand matter is a choice of life

When you’re in bed in night and

her breath is just that close beside and

you’re feeling all is lost from you and

no matter what you wish you seem to be

getting less and less of what you thought

was right to you, now instead awake

Awake from what you thought was awake

Remember that very first best desire

why you held her hand (or held his)

You listening, listen now to a rhythm’d heart

that is kin to the pulse of unlabored wind

It has never been about you

It is about what you’re beside

It’s about what love says it is, allow and

Open your arms to a dawn

Cast your heart into a night

Love reaches meaning only outside a box

And heals everything broken, even

what was never broken at all

Eat your vegetables and some fruit

Share a spoon and some soup

Break bread because it’s meant to be

Recognize a hand that speaks in light

Meditate   then   act

Move in right directions you see

Use fewer periods when you write and

breath, and oh yea,

Dare to write bad poems too

Maybe a friend is looking for you

Neil Reid © March 2010

with thanks to Sean for the idea and being a friend

Sean Fraser’s blog, The Dolls Point Blogger

and posting: Time Always Runs Out

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read write prompt #115,
what do you believe by Carolee Sherwood

What do you believe? Make a list. Elaborate. Then what don’t you believe. Ditto.
Stir, and see what poem comes.

Read the RWP prompt for full descriptive details.
Read other participants responses to this prompt.

A promise kept

I believe in no-edges.

I believe my-breath-becomes-you, and yours-mine.

Since you were a child you’ve breathed inside of me.

Simple science can figure that. Don’t need no math to calculate.

A pair of eyes can see and pronounce. Beauty-first-in-hand.

A father’s lingered gaze. Generous.

Mosaic reflected sense plows earth & clean.

Say it’s a lie. You can. I won’t stop you.

Better language may plead, but won’t cajole

without shared willingness unbound.

I believe no-secrets. I believe beauty.

I believe what Keats Grecian urn had to say!

I believe your feeling becomes my feeling.

I also believe mine might sleep in yours (do we dare).

I believe better angels have something to illuminate.

I believe indifference and mean-ness were on that tree

because nothing and no-thing could be left aside

because there is no aside that isn’t also here.

But that’s mere knowledge, not the deed.

Just choose what’s ripe.

I believe a million mouths have something to say.

Yes, choose what’s ripe.

I believe the earth is round.

And so is the better gravity of heart.

Round like coming-round, like fruit & eat,

like bread & bake, like fish-make-swim.

Like our great circle lives do navigate home.

I believe in atoms & all that stuff

and that gravity attracts for a reason too.

I believe in words like gravity. Feel yourself in that embrace.

We are a great multitude of distant binary pairs, we dance.

And may I please, have this one? Dance and close.

Whitman wasn’t an accident.

Words will speak because language wants.

Given sweet or pain, trusting to what voice will become-and

fall into more better self. We are chorus here.

And for all these ceramics of thought as best I might,

existence, faith is the greater bowl. Heaven is written

inside your choice & no matter regrets.

Make your magic be  g o o d   w  o  r  d  s

Neil Reid © February 2010


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May I get that door for you?

This is a poem meant to be meaningful.

Did I say profound? Meant to heal

your hurts, mend your fences, be the apple

a day, brighten your eyes.

Make glossy your coat.

Keep that nose nice and wet!

That’s all good they say.

Will great beauty heal you?

How about a big fat roll of cash?

The perfect cup of morning coffee?

And what will mend a pair of jeans?

A needle and thread and

a willing thumb.

Glad I could be of help.

Neil Reid © November 2009


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Flying cloud

Flying cloud, an ocean swan and fastest clipper ship.  Ever.  

But you know, this ain’t about boats.  So dedicated…

 

Flying cloud

 

 

Yes. You. Like
a clipper in the mists
her masts raked
ready for the gale.

 

They wonder why
I love the sea.

 

One glance as mine,
they’d understand.

 

Just as I follow
fallow wind.

 

Neil Reid © October 2009


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